Subject: [midcom] Protocol evalutation: General comments

From: Martin Stiemerling <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 24 Jun 2002 09:55:50 +0200

Hi,

I have some comments/question with respect to the protocol evaluation 
draft. I'll split my comments into several emails to ease the discussion.
Here are some general comments about the document.
There are some unprintable characters in the document (at least my vi 
doesn't like them and my printer uses some characters that are used in 
the german character set, called Umlaute).
Here is the list:
- Table of Contens: In headings "Appendix A" and "Apendix D"
- Section 1.1.3: In "[Editor's note:" the single quotation mark looks 
like the combination AE.
- Section 2.1.10: SNMP paragraph. The same as above.
- Section 2.2.4: "DIAMETER: he Diameter concept". It should be "The 
Diameter..."
- Normative References: In both items the first quotation mark isn't a 
quotation mark
- Intellectual Propery Statements: There are several strange characters 
in the first paragraph.

Martin
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Martin Stiemerling

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