Subject: Re: [netmod] mib to yang conversion: minor typos

From: Juergen Schoenwaelder <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 8 Nov 2011 20:34:53 +0100

On Tue, Oct 11, 2011 at 04:53:53PM -0400, David Reid wrote:
> Here are a few very minor nits in draft-ietf-netmod-smi-yang-01:
> 
> Section 1, first sentence
>   s/an translation/a translation/ 

fixed
 
> Section 4, first sentence of 2nd paragraph:
>   s/which followed/which is followed/

fixed

> Section 8.1, first sentence. Also, section 10.1, second bullet:
>   s/""read-create"/"read-create"/

fixed

> Section 10.2
>   The description statement for object-1 and object-2 is mission ']'.
>   I think it might be better to just remove the description statement from
>   the example for automatically generated nodes.

fixed (I kept the descriptions for now)

> Section 11:
>   in the alias extension, the argument statement is missing a ';'.

fixed

/js

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